Making the Cut -- Without an Introduction

"Get an introduction to the venture capitalist." It'scapitalist wants before sending the proposal - you will
good advice. It just isn't always possible, or evensave yourself a bundle in printing and shipping costs,
likely. Many outstanding entrepreneurs with equallynot to mention the time saved in going after the true
outstanding financing proposals simply don't have Thetargets.
Introduction.Accentuate the Positive
Unsolicited, and un-introduced, financing proposals areThere are some things you can do that act as a
typically tossed into the dog pile or slush fund orcatalyst in getting your proposal noticed (in addition
circular file. In most venture capital firms it is the jobto having a great business plan, which I assume you
of a new member of the firm, typically someonedo have).
with a freshly scrubbed MBA, to weed through thatFirst, address the plan to a person, not to the
pile, toss out unlikely candidates and pick out anycompany. In your research, you learned about which
projects that are worth looking at. So the first barrierpartners sat on which boards, which ones gave
is a young, ambitious, very well educated,speeches at which industry event. Use that
inexperienced person who wants to make a goodknowledge now to target the proposal to just the
impression on the partners in the firm.right person.
Getting out of the Dog PileAnd, perhaps most importantly, in your cover letter
About 90% to 95% of the proposals in the dog piletell why you are sending this business plan to this
are tossed. Some of the top reasons for tossinglender/investor at this point in time. Perhaps it's
proposals at this stage include:because they funded a company that will be a major
Sloppy appearance. Loose pages held together with asupplier of yours. Perhaps an associate recommended
paper clip, smudges on the pages, yucky colors -that firm. Perhaps you heard the principal speak at a
these are all quick "toss me" clues. This is typically theconvention. The fact that you got his name out of a
very first thing that the reviewer notices, so thebook doesn't count. Make the reason real.
appearance has to be commanding.Making the Second Cut
Too little information. A 1-2 page summary is veryDepending on the size and culture of the venture
nice IF it has been specifically requested by thecapital firm, the initial reader, a mid level associate or
venture capital firm and IF it really does include theeven top partners may make the second cut. Criteria
information requested by that venture capital firm. Ahere focus on the specific needs of the venture
generic 2-page summary sent to 200 venture firms iscapital firm, such as:
pretty much a waste of time. A 50-page dissertationEmphasize symbiotic relationship with existing
on a new patent is equally ineffective - it just doesn'tportfolio companies. Any company that can
provide all the information that a venture capital firmdemonstrate a strong relationship to a successful
needs. The length of the proposal is considerably lessexisting portfolio company, or provide a means of
critical than the quality of the information provided.creating profit in existing portfolio companies, is way
Rarely can sufficient information be provided in lessahead of the game. Not only will the venture capital
than 20 pages, and rarely is it acceptable to presentfirm be well aware of the industry, but it will
more than 30 pages. And all of the pages - nowelcome the influx of influence on the bottom line of
matter how many pages there are -- must beits other companies as well.
responsive to the needs of the specific type ofCreate strong ties where slender threads exist. So an
venture capital firm.Advisory Board member and the venture capitalist
Too much information. There's a myth with somewent to the same graduate school. It's a slender
truth to it: When confronted with a huge pile ofthread of connection. But that graduate school needs
proposals to read, the reader will toss them up in theto be listed prominently in the bio of that Advisory
air, and the heavy ones that fall to the bottom ofBoard member. (As an aside, contact the department
the heap will be read last. A financing proposal withchair or known professors to see if there is a direct
three binders attached, with everything fromintroduction available somewhere.) Create a database
incorporation documentation to copies of patents forof all advisory boards, schools, publications, companies
competing companies, is too much. Likeand associations that all of your key people, contacts
Scheherrazade's stories, the financing proposal enticesand potential investors have. Cross reference those
the reader to want more. Dumping everything in theto everything you can discover about the venture
venture capitalist's lap before ever meeting him givescapitalist. There probably are slender threads that can
the venture firm no reason whatsoever to ask forbe brought to the forefront.
more. In fact, presented with such an overwhelmingDemonstrate an in-depth knowledge of the industry
glump of information, most venture firms would beand its profit structure. It never ceases to amaze me
extremely leery about asking for more.how many people think they know the retail business
Wrong format. There is a structure to a financingwithout ever having sold so much as a pair of shoes.
proposal: the beginning (the cover sheet, the FrontThe same holds true for every industry. Each
Page and the Table of Contents), the middle (theindustry has its quirks and foibles. Each industry has
guts of the information divided into logical sections),unique profit centers and modes of operation. Each
and the end (absolutely essential attachment, such asindustry has its true leaders and its falsettos, those
copy of critical patent). Omitting sections, or writing inwho talk loud but don't truly know anything. Nothing
the format of a novel, does little but confuse thecan beat actual experience in the industry.
issue. Leave the creativity to the presentation itselfThe Final Cut
and keep the structure pretty basic.The top 2-10% of the proposals remain in contention
Information that is too technical. Scientists andhere. About half of the entrepreneurs will be invited
engineers waft poetic about inventions that are allto present a dog and pony show. While the early
but incomprehensible to everyone else. While it isstages of elimination are driven by industry standards,
safe to assume that the venture capitalist isat this level it gets very personal. The selection
intelligent (and he is!), remember that the first line ofprocess here caters to the needs of the specific
defense is someone who isn't terribly experienced. Soventure capital firm at that specific point in time, and
explanations really help. Pretty basic explanations helpcan change from day to day, or from week to
even more.week.
Lack of a concise Summary Page, with specificYou can do everything absolutely right and be
funding needed specified. The Front Page, oreliminated here. Perhaps the other companies in their
Summary Page, contains very specific information:portfolio have hit snags that haven't reached the
the industry, the status of the company, the amountpublic yet. Perhaps the venture capital firm is in the
of money needed, the type of funding requested,midst of over committing to certain industries.
and The Hook. The Hook is a brief note of whateverPerhaps an IPO that was previously scheduled got
it is that distinguishes this company/invention/conceptpulled back, so the venture capital firm doesn't have
from the thousands of others on the market. Lackingthe money it expected to have.
ALL of this information on the Front Page, mostPerhaps there truly is something amiss in your
venture capitalists won't go further.financing proposal that one of the partners picked up
Lack of information on the principals. It is axiomaticon.
that venture capitalists invest in people, not in ideas.The one consolation is that, if you have reached this
There are tens of thousands, if not hundreds ofhigh, you will likely get a call from someone at the
thousands, of patents languishing in the Patent andventure capital firm expressing some type of
Trademark Office. There are very few unemployedexplanation for not proceeding. At the earlier levels of
skilled leaders. Make certain the venture capitalistelimination you probably heard nothing at all. Listen
knows how truly talented your management team is.carefully to what the venture capitalist has to say,
Wrong level of investment or wrong industry forand proceed accordingly. And be encouraged. You
venture capital firm. Venture capital firms receiveARE in top contention, even if this is not quite the
dozens of business plans every day that are simplyright firm.
inappropriate for them. Venture capital firmsLook at your financing proposal again - this time from
specialize. Some like small startups; some only investthe perspective a first reader, and then from the
in mezzanine stage companies. Some preferperspective of a top partner in a venture capital firm
investments under $2.5 million; some will only investintent on making money. Revise. Target. Send it
over $2.5 million. Some specialize in communications oragain.
biotech or energy. Find out what the venture